First attempt at macro

Skintt · 22-11-2005, 08:49

I got my canon 50mm f2.5 macro lens this weekend so I thought I'd post one of my first attempt here for comments... If you're interested it's the eye of Mrs Skintt :naughty:

ISO 1600 (unfortunately I didn't have much light to play with)
f2.5
1/500th

Only adjustments were altering the hue slightly in Photoshop CS

***Steve*** · 22-11-2005, 08:52

The focus is spot on but the white balance seems to be out by quite a margin. I would definately have another play with the original to correct that.

P-E · 22-11-2005, 08:54

My monitor showing strange marking just below left of the eye?

***Steve*** · 22-11-2005, 09:11

I couldn’t resist

I still think it is a little warm, but you will know better than me.?

And before someone else does it..

Again very quick and dirty, if you do it on the original please spend some time and do it properly.

It was just screaming for that treatment

Edit..redone the second shot as the first attempt was very poor

P-E · 22-11-2005, 09:13

How you do the 2nd Steve?

Skintt · 22-11-2005, 09:31

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Originally Posted by Steve

The focus is spot on but the white balance seems to be out by quite a margin. I would definately have another play with the original to correct that.

Had a little play with the original RAW file...

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Originally Posted by Steve

Again very quick and dirty, if you do it on the original please spend some time and do it properly.

It was just screaming for that treatment

Think i might have a go at this one on the original. Nice!

***Steve*** · 22-11-2005, 09:34

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Originally Posted by P-E

How you do the 2nd Steve?

I duplicated the image, converted it to black and white, using curves I then altered its look to how I wanted the finished face to look (contrast mainly). I then used a large soft brush in white to remove all the outline and details that I didn’t want to be seen. I then brought back the original image over the top of my now black and white picture. Adjusted the layers so that the colour was underneath the B&W. Using the eraser I removed the black and white iris to reveal the colour of the eye. Then did a little softening and sharpening in certain areas around the eye, flattened the image and tweaked the levels, bordered it and it was done.

P-E · 22-11-2005, 09:39

Cheers Steve.......

Will give it ago when I have time and find an image.........although it probably for too complicated for me to do.

It has given it a real arty/pro look to the original image imo.

KenCo1964 · 22-11-2005, 09:44

Eye, eye what's going on here then......very good sharp shot and I think the b/w and blue of Steve's is excellent.

**stepheno** · 22-11-2005, 10:56

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Originally Posted by P-E

My monitor showing strange marking just below left of the eye?

Yep....I can only assume it's something on the lens. Nice pic by the way.

regards

Skintt · 22-11-2005, 11:04

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Originally Posted by Steve

I duplicated the image, converted it to black and white, using curves I then altered its look to how I wanted the finished face to look (contrast mainly). I then used a large soft brush in white to remove all the outline and details that I didn’t want to be seen. I then brought back the original image over the top of my now black and white picture. Adjusted the layers so that the colour was underneath the B&W. Using the eraser I removed the black and white iris to reveal the colour of the eye. Then did a little softening and sharpening in certain areas around the eye, flattened the image and tweaked the levels, bordered it and it was done.

Ok, here's my first attempt at replicating Steve's changes...

Hopefully I should be able to improve on it when I'm at home and have photoshop infront of me (we only have a licence for paint shop pro at work)

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Originally Posted by P-E

My monitor showing strange marking just below left of the eye?

I'm not sure what exactly it is, the only thing I can think is the way the light is shining through her hair and casting an odd shadow just below her eye, which is in sharp focus compared the rest of her upper cheek.

dazzajl · 22-11-2005, 12:23

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Again very quick and dirty

I know I'm not the only one here immature enough to snigger at that. :naughty:

Liked the conversion too. For a first attempt I thought that was brilliant Skintt.

busterboy · 22-11-2005, 17:39

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Originally Posted by Steve

I couldn’t resist

You have got the skin tones spot on there Steve, Nice work..

SammyC · 23-11-2005, 10:46

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Originally Posted by Steve

The focus is spot on ...

Hmmm, I'm not sure that it is actually. Considering it was taken at 1/500 I would have thought the iris would have been sharper. I think the focus might have been on the eyebrow.

Any thoughts?

Skintt · 23-11-2005, 16:10

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Originally Posted by SammyC

Hmmm, I'm not sure that it is actually. Considering it was taken at 1/500 I would have thought the iris would have been sharper. I think the focus might have been on the eyebrow.

Any thoughts?

I think you're probably right. It was manually focused, and I'm just not that great at judging the focal point in the viewfinder (yet

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