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Old 09-05-2007, 09:01   #1 (permalink)
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First Macro Spider

Well here goes.... I saw this spider hard at work on the climbing frame in my back garden, so thought I would try a closeup shot.



This is my first attempt at macro, so please critique this to help me improve.

I look forward to all your comments.

The spider was very obliging and stopped work for this shot!

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'Tis a good shot, Steve!

Got the right combo of DOF - spider in focus but nicely blurred BG. And I'm guessing that you framed the spider against that green (as it's not flat-on, which would've been an easier comp for focus). I might be tempted to darken those lightish patches, but it's merely tinkering and no big deal!
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Your first try turned out great.... Look forward to seeing more from you!
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Good shot with the web, nothing like a spider floating in space as it is easy to miss the web.
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Thanks for your comments!

Yes Markuluos, you guessed right! I did frame it against the green, as a straight on shot would have produced a very bright and distracting background.

This was one of those.. look out of the kitchen window and take the opportunity shots, grab camera and out into the garden before the light went and the spider ran off!
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great shot ,and love the details on spider legs, i would maybe darken the spider up a bit , so emphasises the spiders dark and light areas.Hope you understand what iam saying steve.
I also look forward to seeing some more images from you Steve
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Thanks Chickadee!
I try and leave my digital pics untouched if at all possible, so that I can get used to trying to get the shot right with my camera (which means I will have to use and learn alot more about my camera and exposure etc..)

But I do see what you mean!

Will upload some more pics later.

There are some in my gallery

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