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Old 24-08-2007, 01:32   #1 (permalink)
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the title of the image is WILTED. I shot this in my makeshift studio using built in flash @ f-11 and my main strobe set in the upper left firing down @ f-13 and my secondary strobe fired at the white back drop @ f-13. During this shoot i had bracketed the exposures but ultimately finding the high key exposure the most appealing.

the image below is of my cheap basement studio. Please dont critique it I only wanted to show off my $3.98 backdrop
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Old 24-08-2007, 02:44   #2 (permalink)
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I like how you off set the vase--your color combination is good as well. Your second picture has a red vase with flowers. Can we see that also?
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thank you....here is another of those studio shots
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Very impressive shot/s & great to see the use of some cost effective backdrop
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Thanks for letting us see the red vase. I like how you can see the leaves through the vase.
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Nice shots, just shows you don't need thousands of pounds worth of kit to get some excellent results, please don't tell my wife .

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Yup, good efforts here Billy and good to see you using your initiative to set the shot up.

The only bit that slightly bothers me with the top shot is the BG surrounding the vase as it looks a bit grey, almost as though it has been touched up with the burning in tool but it has taken away from the crisp clean white backdrop a little. 2nd shot is good, just a tad tightly cropped at the bottom, I'd like the picture to breathe a little more in that area.

Good work, well done.
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