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Old 16-09-2007, 18:30   #1 (permalink)
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First Studio Shoot - Fabienne

First attempt at Studio Photography , taken at Cheltenham Camera Clubs monthly studio session. Thanks to Hoffy for setting up perfect lighting, one of the other members for requesting this pose & Fabienne for being such an excellnet model to shoot



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Old 16-09-2007, 18:32   #2 (permalink)
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Re: First Studio Shoot - Fabienne

By the way I have cropped just above where the dress started before people ask
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Old 16-09-2007, 19:52   #3 (permalink)
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By the way I have cropped just above where the dress started before people ask
Well that spoilt my imagination running away I like the shot and think the model is very pretty...being very picky but maybe the lower right is a little bright. I would say her left arm/elbow (awl) is too close to the frame.......
very lucky bloke though!!
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Old 16-09-2007, 20:32   #4 (permalink)
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Re: First Studio Shoot - Fabienne

ahaa heres the black and white ... I like this pose better than the other set
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Old 16-09-2007, 21:49   #5 (permalink)
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Re: First Studio Shoot - Fabienne

More Mono to come, once I get time to process the shots
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Old 17-09-2007, 13:30   #6 (permalink)
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Re: First Studio Shoot - Fabienne

I must admit Dave you were lucky. Your first studio group and you happen to come on the rare occasion that we have model of the ability of Fabienne and Lisa.
I must admit your image quality is very good. Fabienne is one of those models that you put infront of the camera and you cannot help but get a good picture.
Don't forget Lisa, another stunning model with lots of ability and looks.
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Old 17-09-2007, 13:32   #7 (permalink)
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Re: First Studio Shoot - Fabienne

Just seen that thread for Studio day. The bill is in the post Dave. lol
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Old 17-09-2007, 13:38   #8 (permalink)
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Re: First Studio Shoot - Fabienne

Just trawling through the Lisa shots, to post up soon.

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Fabienne is one of those models that you put infront of the camera and you cannot help but get a good picture.
Knew there was a good reason this was so good!
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Old 17-09-2007, 16:45   #10 (permalink)
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Re: First Studio Shoot - Fabienne

..... but 90% truthful
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Re: First Studio Shoot - Fabienne

Yup, lovely stuff Dave. I'll be brave enough to stick a neg in just for the heck of it: the elbow touching the edge of the frame is a slight weakness, would prefer it to have a touch of space around it.

Other than that, an excellent first attempt at studio which I am not great at myself and I know is hard work.... especially when you have the other members of the club all giving you ideas and thinking they are helping LOL.

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Old 17-09-2007, 19:04   #12 (permalink)
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Re: First Studio Shoot - Fabienne

Elbow is a valid point. Think I will clone some space in there for final version

...& hey , if I don't hear any negs, how am I going to improve
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