Going on 25

BityBabyNurse · 07-05-2007, 04:15

Like I said, going on 25.... How is this one? C&C welcomed!

chickadee · 07-05-2007, 05:12

lol , great fun shot ..

regarding my personal thoughts
i would probably crop top bit off ,so as to bring top down to just above her head and crop from bottom up to just above v on dress.
Also may of gone in closer when taking the image .Tad overe exposed on our right arm But love the expression and great eye contact as ,from the viewers aspect you keep going straight to the eyes.Again just my opinion ,sure others will think differently. Think you have a great little poser and think it is such a classic look .

skipper954 · 07-05-2007, 16:19

Great pose, but the lighting isn't very good. The highlight should be on her face, not her chest. Usually the viewers eye goes to the brightest area first.

I agree with sue's cropping idea.

skip

**Dabhand16** · 07-05-2007, 16:59

Yes, looking at the dappled lighting in the background, it look like you have caught her with the shade in the wrong place.

Still a very nice picture, but next time you will be more aware of the lighting and position her better.

Rob Barron · 08-05-2007, 16:48

I like the image, it works great. Just needs recropping and lightening to lift it from the shadows. The rest of the image is all down to the girl and the sassy pose, lovely stuff.

Here's an idea of how I felt it could be improved.... maybe a touch too light now but you get the idea at least

Cheers,
Rob

BityBabyNurse · 08-05-2007, 20:12

Ah yes, that's better, next time I'll evaluate my lighting and shadows much better. Thanks

07-05-2007, 04:15	#1 (permalink)
BityBabyNurse Quite Chatty Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Rural Georgia Posts: 94	Going on 25 Like I said, going on 25.... How is this one? C&C welcomed!

07-05-2007, 05:12	#2 (permalink)
chickadee Been here a while Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tassie Australia Posts: 483	Re: Going on 25 lol , great fun shot .. regarding my personal thoughts i would probably crop top bit off ,so as to bring top down to just above her head and crop from bottom up to just above v on dress. Also may of gone in closer when taking the image .Tad overe exposed on our right arm But love the expression and great eye contact as ,from the viewers aspect you keep going straight to the eyes.Again just my opinion ,sure others will think differently. Think you have a great little poser and think it is such a classic look .

07-05-2007, 16:19	#3 (permalink)
skipper954 Feet under the table Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Southeast Florida USA Posts: 1,721	Re: Going on 25 Great pose, but the lighting isn't very good. The highlight should be on her face, not her chest. Usually the viewers eye goes to the brightest area first. I agree with sue's cropping idea. skip

07-05-2007, 16:59	#4 (permalink)
Dabhand16 Pixalo Crew Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Dunstable Bedfordshire UK Posts: 8,723	Re: Going on 25 Yes, looking at the dappled lighting in the background, it look like you have caught her with the shade in the wrong place. Still a very nice picture, but next time you will be more aware of the lighting and position her better.

08-05-2007, 16:48	#5 (permalink)
Rob Barron Loves the place Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Poole, Dorset Posts: 5,115	Re: Going on 25 I like the image, it works great. Just needs recropping and lightening to lift it from the shadows. The rest of the image is all down to the girl and the sassy pose, lovely stuff. Here's an idea of how I felt it could be improved.... maybe a touch too light now but you get the idea at least Cheers, Rob

08-05-2007, 20:12	#6 (permalink)
BityBabyNurse Quite Chatty Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Rural Georgia Posts: 94	Re: Going on 25 Ah yes, that's better, next time I'll evaluate my lighting and shadows much better. Thanks

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