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Quite Chatty
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Rural Georgia
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Going on 25
Like I said, going on 25.... How is this one? C&C welcomed!
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Been here a while
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Tassie Australia
Posts: 483
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Re: Going on 25
lol , great fun shot ..
regarding my personal thoughts i would probably crop top bit off ,so as to bring top down to just above her head and crop from bottom up to just above v on dress. Also may of gone in closer when taking the image .Tad overe exposed on our right arm But love the expression and great eye contact as ,from the viewers aspect you keep going straight to the eyes.Again just my opinion ,sure others will think differently. Think you have a great little poser and think it is such a classic look . ![]() |
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Feet under the table
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Southeast Florida USA
Posts: 1,721
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Re: Going on 25
Great pose, but the lighting isn't very good. The highlight should be on her face, not her chest. Usually the viewers eye goes to the brightest area first.
I agree with sue's cropping idea. skip |
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Pixalo Crew
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Dunstable Bedfordshire UK
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Re: Going on 25
Yes, looking at the dappled lighting in the background, it look like you have caught her with the shade in the wrong place.
Still a very nice picture, but next time you will be more aware of the lighting and position her better. |
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Loves the place
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: Poole, Dorset
Posts: 5,115
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Re: Going on 25
I like the image, it works great. Just needs recropping and lightening to lift it from the shadows. The rest of the image is all down to the girl and the sassy pose, lovely stuff.
Here's an idea of how I felt it could be improved.... maybe a touch too light now but you get the idea at least ![]() Cheers, Rob ![]() |
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