[j sotelo]

Ok Hit me hard meaning I really want to know what you think, I'm do not have that much experience in photography, so I want to better my skills. what do you think?

[Soupdragon]

OK, here goes.
The composition is fine.
The image seems a little flat.
The large area of white/blown highlights makes it difficult for my eyes to deal with the contrast.

Just my opinion!

[stepheno]

I like the expression on er face...obviously something on her mind. The detail of her dress is dragging my eyes away.

[fionaB]

love the subject and comp........ not sure about the framing, would prefer a solid white i think....... a little burdning to the highlighted area would make it less conspicuous. an adjustment in levels or curves to increase the tonal range perhaps to give it a fuller range of tones.

a good image with great potential and nothing hugely wrong

fi

[dogdots]

I find the brightness around the lower part of her face alittle distracting to her face. I would darken that somewhat. I find that what she is wearing adds interest to the photo. Other then that I like the picture.

[KenCo]

I like the shot, comp and sharpness are fine. The brighter area is a bit of a shame but doesn't really bother me although it probably would if more contrast were applied.....I also think it could stand a little something (levels, Contrast or sharpen). The only thing I don't like is the way you have the dress going out on the border like that.
Ken.

[j sotelo]

thanks, I will see her next month again i will keep all that in mind I really appreciate it.

[skipper954]

Interesting image. I wonder what she is thinking?

I agree with the comments on the tonal range. In PS, levels fixes in a heartbeat. Also, I don't like the highlight on the lower right. It detracts.

Finally, I don't like the way her dress has leaked out into the frame. But the frame itself is a good touch.

skip