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24-03-2008, 17:26
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Be honest!
I like this although it's not a picture with a specific focal point.
Anyhoo, bring it. 
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24-03-2008, 19:49
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Feet under the table
Join Date: Jul 2007
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Re: Be honest!
I quite like it, possibly a bit too black at the bottom and left, but its got something about it for me. I think this ones all about the sky.
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24-03-2008, 19:54
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Re: Be honest!
It is a magnificent sky - I guess it's a shame there wasn't something to place in the FG but I can see why you like it!
Desaturating the blue a touch might also remove the magenta-ish tinge in the upper cloud |
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24-03-2008, 20:04
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Re: Be honest!
I think this is really nice and stands on its own, even with no focal point. As summer said, it is all about the sky.
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24-03-2008, 20:19
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Feet under the table
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: 40 miles south of St. Louis
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Re: Be honest!
Hi Soupy,
It's about the sky alright, and the cup of coffee or tea that's right there as you enter the sky. First thing I saw,,,sorry, but clouds that speak to the subconscious mind will distort your hopes for a sublime sceen.  I should say a cup on a saucer with a little wiff of hot coming out the top.
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24-03-2008, 20:28
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Re: Be honest!
Love the sky tones, but I'd like to see a teeny bit more detail in the bottom LHS if there is any. I think it works because there is tonal balance on a diagonal from the top left to the bottom right, with light and dark, not making the image too tonally segragated (not a home office term for racism
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24-03-2008, 20:43
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Re: Be honest!
Like it but as others have said bottom left could do with being a bit brighter other than that cracking shot
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24-03-2008, 21:26
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Feet under the table
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Re: Be honest!
Does anyone see a cup on a saucer,
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24-03-2008, 21:34
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Loves the place
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Location: London, England
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Re: Be honest!
I had to look for a while then I saw it. You've ruined my viewing pleasure of this image now
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24-03-2008, 22:49
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Re: Be honest!
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25-03-2008, 03:04
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Re: Be honest!
Great cup + saucer shot
 (Does that answer your question Boofers )PS I too would like to see some detail on the deck ... not sure what I'm looking at regarding the ground ... is it land, sea, all/none of the above? Anyhow, great sky 
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25-03-2008, 13:40
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Re: Be honest!
Thanks all, comments duly noted.
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25-03-2008, 19:58
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Re: Be honest!
oh thats nice , as has already been said, the FG is a bit dark but a nice shot tho! and yeah i see a sup and causer...................... oh i like your copyright stamp est : late afternoon! lol
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