Imira

ftmftm · 02-02-2007, 23:46

Imira very new to modelling, but a very nice girl to work with. David

Rob Barron · 03-02-2007, 00:17

I'm sure she's a lovely girl and I don't have any problem with the way she looks but the lighting here has gone badly awry. She has two burnt out area on the face and a badly burnt out shoulder which blends to the white background. Same problem on her right hand, middle knuckle, and left foot which is more burnt out than visible.

Sorry Dave, not one of your better ones I'm afraid and I can't suggest a way to rescue it as the burnt out areas have no detail in them so there is nothing to get back by reducing the brightness in those areas.

Have you got any other of the same girl? I am sure you must have

Cheers,
Rob

ftmftm · 03-02-2007, 00:46

Hi Rob, Thanks for your comment, the picture might not be to everyones taste but, it is exactly what i was after, call me different, i don't know but to be honest i love these sorts of pic's.
Yes i have lots of other pic's of Imira which i will post when i process them. Thanks again for your comments Rob, they are appreciated. David

**Dabhand16** · 03-02-2007, 11:40

I both agree with Rob, and also like the shot. At the end of the day, it is always down to personal taste, even the actual pose, where there is always lots of debate.

Generally, I like your shots, but some stand out when the variables fall towards my tastes. The ones I find 'OK' will float someone's boat too. You could give this to five different people and come up with five variations on the lighting/pose. All will be valid according to taste. Everone's a winner!

Rob Barron · 03-02-2007, 13:14

You were aiming for a shot with various parts of the model burnt out? Ok, new one on me but if it floats your boat then fine

***Dave*** · 04-02-2007, 09:49

If the photographer has achieved what they are after, then it's a result

Lot's of fashions / trend magazines use this style of shot, so it has it's audience. Rob's comments are correct if after a perfectly exposed shot, but as with lots of photography there is always a different take on a shot, which is what makes it so interesting

For me , I like the shot, so top job

skipper954 · 06-02-2007, 12:38

Interesting comments here.

My only concern is that her left foot seems disconnected because of the pose. To me, that is very disconcerting.

skip

02-02-2007, 23:46	#1 (permalink)
ftmftm Getting Comfy Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Sunderland Posts: 248	Imira Imira very new to modelling, but a very nice girl to work with. David

03-02-2007, 00:17	#2 (permalink)
Rob Barron Loves the place Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Poole, Dorset Posts: 5,200	Re: Imira I'm sure she's a lovely girl and I don't have any problem with the way she looks but the lighting here has gone badly awry. She has two burnt out area on the face and a badly burnt out shoulder which blends to the white background. Same problem on her right hand, middle knuckle, and left foot which is more burnt out than visible. Sorry Dave, not one of your better ones I'm afraid and I can't suggest a way to rescue it as the burnt out areas have no detail in them so there is nothing to get back by reducing the brightness in those areas. Have you got any other of the same girl? I am sure you must have Cheers, Rob __________________ Rob Barron robbarron@aol.com If you look down on other people, don't expect them to look up to you! Last edited by Rob Barron : 03-02-2007 at 13:15.

03-02-2007, 00:46	#3 (permalink)
ftmftm Getting Comfy Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Sunderland Posts: 248	Re: Imira Hi Rob, Thanks for your comment, the picture might not be to everyones taste but, it is exactly what i was after, call me different, i don't know but to be honest i love these sorts of pic's. Yes i have lots of other pic's of Imira which i will post when i process them. Thanks again for your comments Rob, they are appreciated. David

03-02-2007, 11:40	#4 (permalink)
Dabhand16 Pixalo Crew Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Dunstable Bedfordshire UK Posts: 8,988	Re: Imira I both agree with Rob, and also like the shot. At the end of the day, it is always down to personal taste, even the actual pose, where there is always lots of debate. Generally, I like your shots, but some stand out when the variables fall towards my tastes. The ones I find 'OK' will float someone's boat too. You could give this to five different people and come up with five variations on the lighting/pose. All will be valid according to taste. Everone's a winner!

03-02-2007, 13:14	#5 (permalink)
Rob Barron Loves the place Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Poole, Dorset Posts: 5,200	Re: Imira You were aiming for a shot with various parts of the model burnt out? Ok, new one on me but if it floats your boat then fine

04-02-2007, 09:49	#6 (permalink)
*Dave* Pixalo Crew Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 14,906	Re: Imira If the photographer has achieved what they are after, then it's a result Lot's of fashions / trend magazines use this style of shot, so it has it's audience. Rob's comments are correct if after a perfectly exposed shot, but as with lots of photography there is always a different take on a shot, which is what makes it so interesting For me , I like the shot, so top job

06-02-2007, 12:38	#7 (permalink)
skipper954 Feet under the table Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Southeast Florida USA Posts: 1,721	Re: Imira Interesting comments here. My only concern is that her left foot seems disconnected because of the pose. To me, that is very disconcerting. skip

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