[ftmftm]

This is the last of Leanne im putting up, this one is more for a boy's magazine,
thanks David

[fionaB]

mmmmmmm i know u said it was more for a boys mag and i agree. i dont like the pose, it is too contrived.

Fi

[Gary Bagshawe]

I can see what you were going for with this shot but the eyes just don't have it if you know what I mean. Technically good, but the eyes really should be saying im a very naughty girl etc

[skipper954]

Agree with the above. The technicals are terrific.

But the pose and industrial strength bra are not. For a boys mag, the bra should be a lot smaller This image just doesn't give me any emotion.

Leanne needs to be doing something else with her hands. In addition, I think that her hair swept to one side behind her on over one shoulder in front would add to a pose.

But as I said, the lighting and focus are perfect. (well, except maybe a tad too red!)

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[Rob Barron]

I still can't get away from the feeling that she is biting her finger rather than seductively placing it between her lips. I agree with the others on the large bra and the pose which makes her look like she is clutching her boobs for fear of them falling or something! It actually makes her look like her left boob is bigger than her right.

Did you take any pics of Leanne with a different bra at all David? I can't help feeling that a slightly smaller and more feminine style bra would suit her look better. Obviously all bras are for females but they are not all as feminine as others. Leanne is a very pretty girl and I am sure you will get plenty more great shots of her (still coming out over-red but might be you need a calibration of your monitor as you mentioned before) so don't feel you can't post them just because we have seen the girl a few times. As you try different ideas, we'll be more than happy to take a look and see how the images are progressing.

Keep up the good work,
Rob

[nichpr]

If you shoot Leanne again, you might want to see if you can instill a sense of playfulness in her demeanor - I think she is trying to be playful and teasing but it just isn't working. Are you coaching her or is this "look" one she initiated? Can't tell if the awkward look is from her discomfort or just lack of knowing what to do. Perhaps you could provide her a large mirror so she can see what she is doing and some "boys" magazines to help her perfect "the look" you or she is after.
Other than that you seem to have the lighting nailed down.
From all the comments - you can probably tell we are enjoying watching your progress here.