[ftmftm]

Done this with Leanne on Friday, just had the chance to post it now as i was down Sheffield for the weekend, tried to get some shots down there but left it abit late to contact people. Thanks David

[Rob Barron]

I like this one David, it has a good pose and expression. Two things strike me as weak points: it seems a bit too red in tone, might need a slight change in colour balance. The other thing is the 'bottom area' is a bit dark. Naturally there is a rather strong shadow there but I think this could have been reduced with a reflector to prevent it being as strong as it is.

As I said though, those are just a couple of technical points, the image itself is very good and I love the strength of eye contact.

Cheers,
Rob

[ftmftm]

Originally Posted by Rob Barron

I like this one David, it has a good pose and expression. Two things strike me as weak points: it seems a bit too red in tone, might need a slight change in colour balance. The other thing is the 'bottom area' is a bit dark. Naturally there is a rather strong shadow there but I think this could have been reduced with a reflector to prevent it being as strong as it is.

As I said though, those are just a couple of technical points, the image itself is very good and I love the strength of eye contact.

Cheers,
Rob

Thanks Rob i was trying for more light on the top half of Leanne to make her face and upper body stand out more. I hope this makes sense. lol David

[bob]

nice shot, like the lighting,well done

[skipper954]

Generally speaking, a good shot.

Besides the red tone shift, my only niggle is that her knuckes are blown.

I like the backlighting and pose, and the lower shadow doesn't bother me because it forces attention to Leanne's face and upper body, as you wanted.

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