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Old 10-09-2013, 12:35   #1 (permalink)
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Old 10-09-2013, 13:10   #2 (permalink)

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I LIKA THIS JAKE, CAN'T SEE ANYTHING TO WRONG, GOOD ATTEMPT
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Old 10-09-2013, 13:30   #3 (permalink)
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WOW, to say people arn't your thing you have done a fantastic job here, the lighting is superb. great catch lights in the eyes and the subtle lighting on the back of her head just catching and lifting the hair is excellent. Love the vignetting effect as well. A very very good portrait which you should be very pleased with. Ive seen stuff done by "professionals" that are in no way this good.
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Old 10-09-2013, 15:32   #4 (permalink)
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Jake, Absolutely nothing wrong, I will give it 10/10. Lets see some more.
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Old 10-09-2013, 18:03   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Lika

Great shot Jake

Being uber picky the highlights on her forehead, nose, cheek and shoulder could be toned down, but not a deal breaker.

Great to see a young neck turned like that with no wrinkles/folds or creases!!
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Old 10-09-2013, 18:43   #6 (permalink)
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TFL guys

Know what you mean about the neck Dabs - mines like that even before I turn my head
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Old 10-09-2013, 19:12   #7 (permalink)
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I,ll stick me neck out & say theres not much wrong there, nice job
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Old 11-09-2013, 00:14   #8 (permalink)
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For me the problems are the way the right eyebrow is continued along the nose; the way that this shading and the prominent nasal highlight give the effect of a double nose (side by side); the mark under the right eye; the highlight on the upper gum; the highlight on the metal fastener on the shoulder strap; and the ugly material bulge on the back.

Personally, I find the stray hair distracting and unsightly, and I don't like the way the hair at the back of the head has a spiky appearance at odds with the flowing curves elsewhere.

I'm in two minds about the earing that makes such a big impact and catches (and holds) my eye.
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Old 11-09-2013, 08:49   #9 (permalink)
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I take your points about the highlights, the line of the back of the dress ect.
However the state of the hair was considered and left as it was as I liked the contrast between the smooth features of her face and the coarseness of the hair giving a bit of a "wild child" look
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Old 11-09-2013, 09:46   #10 (permalink)
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Lovely shot Jake. Tend to agree with Graham about the highlights but her ultra smooth complexion makes it very difficult to get some definition around her nose without either some highlight or shadow. Excellent attempt
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Pretty. I love the color and sharpness. I love the messy hair style.
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Thanks for looking
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Works for me - great shot Jake!
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