Lily 2

sawdust · 26-05-2007, 17:16

taken up on what has been said about the first one so had another go what do you think

Charlotte · 26-05-2007, 17:50

A bit tightly cropped on the LHS, but other than that ... love it

**Dabhand16** · 26-05-2007, 19:27

Very nice Sawdust, very nice indeed

For me, the tighter crop should have been on the other side as the flower has just a slight lean to the left.

skipper954 · 27-05-2007, 15:31

I think the first one is better. However, I was thinking something like this. Although I didn't get the framing, which adds.

sawdust · 28-05-2007, 16:48

Yep see what you meen will have a take three moment
Thanks everyone for the input

JMitchell · 28-05-2007, 18:13

Really like this one. Not a big deal if you can't do the crop the other way around, but if you can, I'd like to see it!

**Sonsey** · 28-05-2007, 18:16

I like the crop just as it is on this one, great shot

Gary Bagshawe · 28-05-2007, 18:27

Oh thats very nice.

Charlotte · 28-05-2007, 20:53

Well, I don't think you need to do the crop 'the other way around', because I really like the hint of a leaf that I can see on the RHS, which I think really adds to the shot. I just think a slight extension to the left edge would do the trick, about 1cm to match the space at the top edge.

Just noticed a shadow, or ghosting, on the top left petal, which you might want to fix, sawdust. This might be a leaf in the BG, but it looks like it shouldn't be there.

P-E · 28-05-2007, 21:17

Nice shot but I can see things in the dark background.

sawdust · 29-05-2007, 20:00

yes I can see them but they are not in the print or the file

skipper954 · 29-05-2007, 20:50

Quote:

Originally Posted by P-E

Nice shot but I can see things in the dark background.

I don't see them on the screen. But when I pimped and brought out the shadows, there were leaves and stuff there.

skip

sawdust · 30-05-2007, 21:06

that will be my handy work now did I clone them out or burn them

Rob Barron · 02-06-2007, 17:22

Strewth, if there is a hint of a leaf on the right, it's a VERY subtle hint! Far too subtle for me!

I love this Sawdust. I do agree that the space would be better on the other side but minor detail. Lovely work

Cheers,
Rob

**Markulous** · 02-06-2007, 20:35

I too am a "space on the left" and maybe slightly more tilt, tho' neither big deals - lighting works well to bring out detail/texture!

26-05-2007, 17:16	#1 (permalink)
sawdust Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Ashby de la zouch Leicestershire Posts: 715	Lily 2 taken up on what has been said about the first one so had another go what do you think

26-05-2007, 17:50	#2 (permalink)
Charlotte Loves the place Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Romsey, Hampshire Posts: 6,319	Re: Lily 2 A bit tightly cropped on the LHS, but other than that ... love it

26-05-2007, 19:27	#3 (permalink)
Dabhand16 Pixalo Crew Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Dunstable Bedfordshire UK Posts: 9,772	Re: Lily 2 Very nice Sawdust, very nice indeed For me, the tighter crop should have been on the other side as the flower has just a slight lean to the left.

27-05-2007, 15:31	#4 (permalink)
skipper954 Feet under the table Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Southeast Florida USA Posts: 1,721	Re: Lily 2 I think the first one is better. However, I was thinking something like this. Although I didn't get the framing, which adds. Last edited by skipper954 : 27-05-2007 at 15:31. Reason: typo

28-05-2007, 16:48	#5 (permalink)
sawdust Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Ashby de la zouch Leicestershire Posts: 715	Re: Lily 2 Yep see what you meen will have a take three moment Thanks everyone for the input

28-05-2007, 18:13	#6 (permalink)
JMitchell Feet under the table Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: London, England Posts: 3,716	Re: Lily 2 Really like this one. Not a big deal if you can't do the crop the other way around, but if you can, I'd like to see it!

28-05-2007, 18:16	#7 (permalink)
Sonsey Pixalo Crew Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: N. Ireland Posts: 7,259	Re: Lily 2 I like the crop just as it is on this one, great shot

28-05-2007, 18:27	#8 (permalink)
Gary Bagshawe Rep Point Winner 07 Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Sheffield UK Posts: 2,243	Re: Lily 2 Oh thats very nice.

28-05-2007, 20:53	#9 (permalink)
Charlotte Loves the place Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Romsey, Hampshire Posts: 6,319	Re: Lily 2 Well, I don't think you need to do the crop 'the other way around', because I really like the hint of a leaf that I can see on the RHS, which I think really adds to the shot. I just think a slight extension to the left edge would do the trick, about 1cm to match the space at the top edge. Just noticed a shadow, or ghosting, on the top left petal, which you might want to fix, sawdust. This might be a leaf in the BG, but it looks like it shouldn't be there.

28-05-2007, 21:17	#10 (permalink)
P-E Loves the place Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Sheffield, S.Yorkshire UK Posts: 7,801	Re: Lily 2 Nice shot but I can see things in the dark background.

29-05-2007, 20:00	#11 (permalink)
sawdust Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Ashby de la zouch Leicestershire Posts: 715	Re: Lily 2 yes I can see them but they are not in the print or the file

30-05-2007, 21:06	#13 (permalink)
sawdust Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Ashby de la zouch Leicestershire Posts: 715	Re: Lily 2 that will be my handy work now did I clone them out or burn them

02-06-2007, 17:22	#14 (permalink)
Rob Barron Loves the place Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Poole, Dorset Posts: 5,386	Re: Lily 2 Strewth, if there is a hint of a leaf on the right, it's a VERY subtle hint! Far too subtle for me! I love this Sawdust. I do agree that the space would be better on the other side but minor detail. Lovely work Cheers, Rob

02-06-2007, 20:35	#15 (permalink)
Markulous Pixalo Crew Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Peak District Posts: 10,144	Re: Lily 2 I too am a "space on the left" and maybe slightly more tilt, tho' neither big deals - lighting works well to bring out detail/texture!