[ftmftm]

Mariye is 19 and it was her first time doing a photo shoot, she was a natural in front of the camera, Thanks for looking. David

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[Gary Bagshawe]

Hi David, the lighting seems ok but if I may say that the poses could do with a little improving. Also the composition, for instance... the second shot would have looked much better had you framed it to include all the models bum and just the top of her legs, I hasten to add that this is only my opinion, A promising start though

[skipper954]

Several points David.

I don't think the color of the lingerie is the best for Mariye. When I do a shoot and the model brings several swimsuits, for instance, I ask her which color looks the best on her. Most women know what their best colors are.

Secondly, hair across the face as in #3 is distracting.

I agree that the poses could be more creative and done to show of Mariye's strong points.

Finally, I don't know if I like the stark white BG. What was the original? Usually managing the background at the shoot is much more effective that trying to massage post proc. But the special effects if done well can be good.

The focus is good, the skin tones are good, and her lighting is quite nice. Lets see more.

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