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Old 17-09-2007, 19:37   #1 (permalink)
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Lisa - Studio Shoot

Here is Lisa from yesterdays Studio shoot. Yet another wonderful model . This time the shot was taken from window light only, with some reflectors to lighten the shadows.

Taken with Nikon D200 & 50mm f/1.8 (oh how I love this cheap lens ) Mono conversion was done in Lightroom & the only tweaking in PS was to remove reflection on lips (Dave Canon will pick up on this ) plus pulled the white end of levels in a tad.

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Old 17-09-2007, 21:35   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Lisa - Studio Shoot

Nice work, she has great lips.
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Old 18-09-2007, 08:01   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Lisa - Studio Shoot

I might've been tempted to remove the frown lines - or, better still, get a pose without them. But otherwise, like the tousled look - very natural looking
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Old 18-09-2007, 15:29   #4 (permalink)
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Re: Lisa - Studio Shoot

Cracking shot but the conversion seems a little flat on my monitor.
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Old 18-09-2007, 15:54   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Lisa - Studio Shoot

Time for a new monitor then

Seriously though, do others find it flat ?
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Old 18-09-2007, 16:00   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Lisa - Studio Shoot

Sorry Dave it might just be my preference for punchy black n white but on my rather nice lacie monitor it appears flat.
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Old 18-09-2007, 16:04   #7 (permalink)
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Sorry Dave it might just be my preference for punchy black n white but on my rather nice lacie monitor it appears flat.
Lacie I'll take my comment back then
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Re: Lisa - Studio Shoot

Not overly flat to me, but I can see what Gary means.

Her cheeks look darker than her nose, mouth and chin to me, (red cheeks?) so upping the contrast might exaggerate this.
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Old 18-09-2007, 16:18   #9 (permalink)
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Re: Lisa - Studio Shoot

Mmm, good point Dabs ..... 1st attempt at playing withall slider for Mono in Light Room. Might try again using known methods in PS
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Re: Lisa - Studio Shoot

Hi Dave, hope you don't mind but I did a quick edit. Minor tweak of levels and a bit of burning in of some midtones and shadows. Just realised your are mister mono and im trying to teach you how to suck eggs. Sorry ill get me coat
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Old 18-09-2007, 17:13   #11 (permalink)
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Re: Lisa - Studio Shoot

LOL ....MOno for landscapes , but portraits are all new to me, so Pimp away
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Re: Lisa - Studio Shoot

Just posted one of Lisa Dave, Have alook and let me know.
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Old 19-09-2007, 08:25   #13 (permalink)
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Thank god she wasn't dressed like that for our shoot.... my missus would have killed me

Very good Hoffy ....still lots for me to learn
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