[ftmftm]

A picture from Saturday with Lucie, David

[skipper954]

Hi David

Boy, do I envy you your models.

The only real problem that I see with this image is that the shadow of Lucie's hair falls too strongly across her left eye, obscuring a part of her face.

Other than that, I rather like the pose, the angle of her shoulders, the decidedly "to heck with you" look, and her pulling her shirt down to strengthen the impression of a girl beneath that huge white shirt. But yet, so much is hidden that it is intriguing. I think that it makes the viewer want to see more images of Lucie. I know that I do.

Good job

skip

[fionaB]

lovely shot David........... i do agree with skip in that the shadow draws the eye, but other than that another great example of your work.

Skip. good to see u back where ya been hiding?

Fi

[skipper954]

Been shooting, processing, trying to scare up more models.

Gonna submit very soon

skip

[ftmftm]

Thanks for the comments, Skip and Fiona, i will post a couple more of Lucie.

David

[Geoff Semmens]

Came here from Lucie 2. My comments there about the technical side still stand. Here Lucie is more engaged with the viewer and so the photo has more stopping power. There is a suggestion that she is in control and is contemplating her next move to capture the viewer...... but it may not be what we think.

Geoff TWO