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Old 05-05-2008, 23:54   #1 (permalink)
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Macro attempt!

I've had my macro lens a couple of weeks now and it's taken some getting used to! This afternoon I spent some time in the garden and a very helpful butterfly was quite happy to pose on a leaf for me. Most of the shots are hopeless because there was a slight breeze but just as I was about to move away, in flew this bee. I took one quick shot and got lucky!

Macro is a whole new world for me so any C & C would be welcome.

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Old 06-05-2008, 00:29   #2 (permalink)
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Very nice for a first attempt!

Focus where it counts, on the eye and lovely detail (so no camera shake!) with an interesting BG. I guess a little more DOF and less in the way of burned highlights tho' neither a big deal (and I generally hate burned highlights!)
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Old 06-05-2008, 07:34   #3 (permalink)
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You did very well to get this excellent 3/4 on shot. I've found the little burggers don't stay around very long so have rattled 000's of frames.
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Old 06-05-2008, 07:55   #4 (permalink)
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For your first attempt - you did good

If it was your 100th attempt - you still did good!
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Old 06-05-2008, 08:29   #5 (permalink)
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You did very well to get this excellent 3/4 on shot. I've found the little burggers don't stay around very long so have rattled 000's of frames.
Tell me about it! I tried last week with one that was hovering about and they move so quickly! This was literally one frame and luck was on my side!
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Old 06-05-2008, 11:09   #6 (permalink)
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Agree with Dabhand 100%. The only thing that would have made it better is if the blue flower had not obscured its face so much.
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Wish I could do as well as you!...Kenny
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One to be proud of!
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Good shot, and I don't think the DOF matters in the shot as you've got the key points in focus (eyes and legs).

Well done and hope for some more.
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Old 06-05-2008, 12:03   #10 (permalink)
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Thank you!

Yes, I agree, seeing the full face would have been better but he flew in and pretty much flew out again so no time to get into a better position!
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Oh for goodness sake Angela, what on earth are you worrying about! This isn't just good as a first attempt, it is good as ANY attempt! Very well done

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Old 06-05-2008, 13:46   #12 (permalink)

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GREAT SHOT ANGELA, THIS IS THE BEE'S KNEES
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well done for beginning . good composition. i know what you are going to say but it's not sharp as it could be - maybe there was still some movement from the wind. you where using good settings - iso 200, exposure 0.008, DOF 10. you have a nice background and light. using levels in some software you could make it look better (contrast). but as i sad - good job for beginning.
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Old 06-05-2008, 15:30   #14 (permalink)
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