[fionaB]

another from Sunday



honesty as always appreciated

TIA

Fi

[Markulous]

Doesn't do anything for me, I'm afraid. Lighting is very flat and sky a little dull which doesn't help the rather confusing subject.

Think there is a pic to be taken there but it needs some dramatic lighting and a more interesting perspective (using that ramp to more effect)

[AQ]

It is a bit cluttered to me with no real focal point. However this looks a interesting place with a lot of possibilities for great photos.

[Gary Bagshawe]

Now I love this, im really getting into the urban exploring thing of late and this is great, it does look a little flat but thats all I could say really. I love the composition and overall creepy feel to the pic.

[brian wright22]

I agree Fiona an interesting place and a bit spooky.

Iv'e had a go at cropping and levels adjust but as you appreciate the file is small and shows now alot of artifacts!!because of the small file.
Regards Brian

[Charlotte]

Not bad, but doesn't particularly grab me. Maybe if it had a dramatic sky. Or maybe a different viewpoint to get some diagonals across the frame. If you do go back, also try to exclude the BG trees, especially the ones growing out of the top of the building

I too think there's a picture to be had of this subject, but this one's a bit too square-on to be of much interest, and the trees are distracting.

[Boofers]

Great place, I would like to see what else you came up with as here on the couch I feel like a potato. I would like to see one from the ground at the lower end of the tracks upward. Hope it wasn't to muddy.

Boofers

[fionaB]

thanx people, have to say it doesnt look flat here BUT as im on a flat screen monitor which hasnt been calibrated i can only go on whati see,which obviously isnt the same as you! lol
I am not gonna bother p[laying with it until i get back on my ownmonitor

Fi