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Mono Lake - Somewhere near Munich
Steve will hate me for not remembering the location , but it was about an hour away from Munich by train
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Re: Mono Lake - Somewhere near Munich
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![]() Very nice shot (as expected), but I'd consider cloning out the boats and the white specks in the shore/bottom tree line, and in an ideal situation, prefer more seperation between this shoreline and the rushes. I find this darkest strip interferes too much. |
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Re: Mono Lake - Somewhere near Munich
I'm with Graham on this: all he says - but I'd even consider cloning out the reeds where they cross into the mountains/sky. Turns it into a simpler (and, to my eye, better) shot!
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Re: Mono Lake - Somewhere near Munich
when looked at up close or further away the clouds perhaps dominate too much,. the subject and composition are good but the tones aren't quite right for me somehow
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Re: Mono Lake - Somewhere near Munich
Meh, I'd leave it tbh....I like it
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Re: Mono Lake - Somewhere near Munich
I like it too, at first thought to much grey matter,,,as for the reeds, that's what it looks like, nice and cluttered...
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Join Date: Nov 2006
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Re: Mono Lake - Somewhere near Munich
Dave, the picture is made by the stone. I would still leave the reeds at this height because:
a. you chose this to be the case when you took the shot b. I think it links the layers at the top Removal of the v small white (sails?), as already suggested may be useful fine tuning. Overall an excellent photograph. |
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