[sbtm]

I have posted 3 pics of mine that I am happy with... would appreciate some feedback on them

[Gary Bagshawe]

maybe if you post them in the forum as well as im thr gallery you may get more feedback.

[Angela]

Yep, if you want more feedback on specific photos then do please post them in here but remember that it's a one photo a day only in Photo Critique. If you'd like to post all three in one thread, then you need to do that in the Photo Sharing Forum.

Look forward to seeing them!

[sbtm]

Ok, here is one pic I like some feedback on...



I like this pic but I don't think am doing much justice to it. I mean I want it to be in mono but not too sure if the angle, the timing is ok... any pointers?

Thanks

[Markulous]

Hmmm, it's a very busy pic which tends to suggest colour rather than mono, tho do like pics that make you look (instead of always using rules to 'guide' viewers) - don't think the upper 1/3rd contributes anything and could be cropped out. Like to see more!

[sbtm]

Yea cropping the upper part would help... a foreground intrest would also give it a boost

[Rob Barron]

I would crop just above the two pictures, one on left and one in similar style so balancing it on the right, keep the second strip light (in background) as well. that is important as it provides a 'ceiling' to your picture so the rest can be lost without any problem.

The lying down pictures on the right work nicely as a lead-in line to the rest of the picture, nice little diagonal. The eye is then left to wander around and check out the little details. I think with that crop it becomes an interesting picture.

Good stuff.
Rob

[fionaB]

yep agree that the top needs to go, there is little of anything of interest there. I do think it works in mono once you get rid of the clutter at the top. lots of things to look at and see so lots to keep the viewers interest.
A really nice shot!

Fi

[skipper954]

I LOVE mono.

But this image fairly screams color. I agree with the crop suggestions.

skip