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Getting Comfy
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Sunderland
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Natasha
new picture from Friday, Natasha has done a few shoots before, very eager to learn and do modeling full time. Great girl to work with.
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Loves the place
Join Date: Sep 2006
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Re: Natasha
A very beautiful girl and I could sit and say all the usual stuff so mind if I just point out a little detail that you might not have noticed? I love the long hair but it is unfortunate that it is hanging down to JUST past her left arm. This in turn is making it look like she has a very hairy forearm!
I know it is her head hair doing it and it is obvious when you look at it but we often say the devil is in the detail and this is just a little thing that for some reason stood out like a sore thumb as soon as I saw it.... Ok, not quite as soon as I saw it.... I saw her figure first but hey, at least I'm honest :o) Cheers, Rob
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Loves the place
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Re: Natasha
as per what Rob said, plus i dont know but i would be tempted to remove the hair on her neck as it looks a bit lost there.
otherwise another cracking image david Fi |
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Getting Comfy
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Re: Natasha
thanks Rob and Fiona, I did notice it but not until i put it up on here, Should have known one of you eagle eyed people would have noticed, haha.
Thanks again for the comment. David |
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Re: Natasha
Her torso looks odd where her right hands is positioned, like there is a bit missing.
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Join Date: Sep 2006
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Re: Natasha
I started to write and wiped it out for some unknown computerized reason. But Belly took the words out of my mouth (reply screen?)
I like the position of Natasha's figure but her hands look like they are in an unnatural position. Thinking about where they should go, I am not sure, but perhaps her left hand belongs on her lower back or hip, and her right hand, which I think is the real issue here, should be lower down or toward her head, or something. I don't know. This is the kind of pose where you have to move her around to see what works. From a technical standpoint, I think that there should be a tad more contrast between Natasha and the background, and I wonder about just a bit more shadow. Still, all in all, I love your work, would try to emulate it except that I don't have a freaking studio. If I can get a frequent flyer to the UK, can I shoot your models in your studio? ![]() skip |
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Been here a while
Join Date: Mar 2007
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Re: Natasha
From me as viewer i think top hand and the position she is in , gives the illusion that there is either a bit missing from her side (am looking at area next to finger next to little finger top hand)
I also think the position of her head is to un natural which intern is having the effect with her hair , also to me her face expression is one of hurry up iam not comfortable I feel that the white bg clashes with her white bikini. Keeping in mind these are only my opinions , from what i see from the image. Please dont be offended in these comments , I appreciated yours and skips pm on insight of this type of photography , and now look at these images from my new perspective ![]()
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