[ftmftm]

Done this with Sasha today, something a little different for a change. Thanks David

[Markulous]

Hands look a little awkward, BGs a little "busy", fenceline cuts the shot in half, sky's a little bright, she is a little too expressionless and the grass needs cutting! But then I mention as I know you can do it right!

[skipper954]

Hey, David

This just isn't up to your usually high standards. I am sorry, but it looks like a snapshot for many of the reasons that Mark mentioned.

I do like the diagonal from the trees to her left leg, but I think that is the only point of interest here.


She is also dead center, which takes away interest and dynamism too.

Her beads should be in the middle of her chest and the large right earring is distracting.

Sorry to be so bloomin critical, but this is the critique section. As you know, usually I love your work.

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