![]() |
|
|||||||
| Photo Critique Discuss Some from the new camera...Okay here's some pics i've taken with the new camera. Still learning, so be gentle.... |
|
Welcome to the Pixalo Photography Community. As a Guest you are free to browse the site, but see what extras you get as a Member here.
|
|
|
![]() |
The thread "Some from the new camera" has not received any replies for 18 months. It has been automatically closed as a result. Please start a new thread on the topic if the information in this thread is not sufficient. |
![]() |
|
|
LinkBack | Thread Tools | Display Modes |
|
|
#1 (permalink) |
|
Forum Regular
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Co. Durham England
Posts: 1,069
![]() |
Some from the new camera
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#2 (permalink) |
|
Pixalo Crew
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: An Englishman living in Germany
Posts: 17,142
![]() ![]() ![]() |
If you edit your post and put [img] tags around your urls they will be shown on the forum as pictures instead of links. This will make it easier for us to view the shots. If you would like me to do the dits for you, I really don't mind
![]() Off to have a look at the shots myself now though.. |
|
|
|
|
|
#3 (permalink) |
|
Feet under the table
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: Nairn
Posts: 1,911
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
I really like the lamb with its' coat shot.
Only thing I'd suggest is taking care about whats in the viewfinder, the post at the bottom is quite intrusive.The first one's not bad either, maybe a little dark in the foreground but you've kept the sky detail, a bit of processing could brighten that up a lot ![]() In fact, hope you don't mind but here's a 30 second mess about ![]()
|
|
|
|
|
|
#4 (permalink) |
|
Pixalo Crew
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: An Englishman living in Germany
Posts: 17,142
![]() ![]() ![]() |
The first one is quite nice and has all the elements of a great picture but it is a little too cluttered in the foreground with no real focus point.
The second one works a lot better as the foreground wets your appetite and your eyes are drawn into the picture..this is very well balanced and a great shot. Third one is nice use of rule of thirds, and good choice of DOF to capture the subject and the background. The b&w version is not contrasty enough for me and the horse could have been better if caught a fraction earlier in the frame. As it is it is just too close to the edge of the frame and make the picture look like a snap rather than a composed picture. The fifth is interesting, may I ask what you where trying to achieve with this? I have some opinions on it but would like to hear your thoughts first? The last picture is not too good at all unfortunately, you have captured the sheep with their backs to us and with a blurred post right in the middle of the picture which distracts immediately. Unless there is some specific reason for showing the rear/back of an animal it is nearly always preferable to capture them from the front showing the expression or eyes. The conversion on this picture is a nice idea but the picture is not strong enough to warrant the post processing.
__________________
An amateur will practice until they get it right, A professional will practice until they don't get it wrong. |
|
|
|
|
|
#5 (permalink) | |
|
Forum Regular
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Co. Durham England
Posts: 1,069
![]() |
Quote:
The 4th shot did look to have more contrast before I put it up and I noticed the difference straight away. The 5th, I took a few shots of the cockerel and chicken crossing the road, all the while focusing on the cockerel but for some reason I lost focus and shifted to the rails, the rails or the side barriers of the cattle grid, being b/w they also resemble a crossing. This was not my intention it just happened but appealed and that is why I submitted it. The 6th, unfortunately I was not quick enough here and the sheep started to walk away but with brining out the odd lamb with the orange plastic jacket looking to the others walking away had a sadness but that’s just the softy in me. Thanks for your comments and thanks dod for your comments too much appreciated. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
#6 (permalink) |
|
Feet under the table
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Northampton
Posts: 2,137
![]() |
if you do [img ]http://link.co.uk/jpg.jpg[/img ] it will show the picture in the post instead of the link. I have put an extra space in after the g to stop it making mincemeat of this post lol
|
|
|
|
|
|
#7 (permalink) |
|
Pixalo Crew
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: An Englishman living in Germany
Posts: 17,142
![]() ![]() ![]() |
Actually i can't edit the post as your file names contain underscores (_) which prevent the [img] tags from working.
|
|
|
|
|
|
#8 (permalink) | |
|
Forum Regular
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Co. Durham England
Posts: 1,069
![]() |
Quote:
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
![]() |
![]() |
The thread "Some from the new camera" has not received any replies for 18 months. It has been automatically closed as a result. Please start a new thread on the topic if the information in this thread is not sufficient. |
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | |
|
|