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| Photo Critique Discuss Southend - Gritty Mono...Was up there today for the "Do Not Refreeze" GDR photography exhibition, which was great. Took some shots, and this ... |
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Loves the place
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Southend - Gritty Mono
Was up there today for the "Do Not Refreeze" GDR photography exhibition, which was great. Took some shots, and this is the one I think is best, others in sharing. COmments and critique welcomed with interest
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Loves the place
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Re: Southend - Gritty Mono
Jack, this image is not holding my attention. There's a lot of calm sea + a lot of overcast sky, but not much else
The land/boats etc. are so far away + there's such a thin sliver of land in the shot that I'm really straining to see anything of it. Sorry but nothing in the picture is grabbing my attention.
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Feet under the table
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Re: Southend - Gritty Mono
Sorry have to agree with Charlotte, its quite dark and I feel a bit like dougal its all a bit 'far away'.
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Re: Southend - Gritty Mono
I have to agree with the two ladies. But what bugs me most about this is is the confusion on the ship and the pier. It is difficult to separate one from another.
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Re: Southend - Gritty Mono
I rather like the empty bleakness, well suited to a B/W. Agree that if the ship was underway that it would've been better having cleared the pierhead
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Re: Southend - Gritty Mono
Thanks for the replies. I think Mark got to what I was really aiming for, but I agree about the boat and the pier, and it was moving, although I had to take the shot quickly
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