thru the window

fionaB · 22-07-2007, 23:44

CnC as always welcome

cpd23 · 23-07-2007, 00:29

Fio

I am not sure if its the angle of the window or the sunlight in the corner, but it just doesn't work for me. The ocean view is great. Thanks for the share

Dave Canon · 24-07-2007, 17:00

Fiona, I think that there is a good shot there but the foreground needs something extra. Maybe a person on the left looking out at the view?

JMitchell · 24-07-2007, 23:20

I like that, the tones and the exposure are great. Perhaps a person on the left would help, but it doesn't bother me. Something new and original

(and in COLOUR!

)

Charlotte · 24-07-2007, 23:37

I like it, except I do think the RHS is cropped too tightly, so that it makes the composition look unbalanced; it looks like you've cropped it tightly in order to exclude an unwanted part of the scene. I like the colours, tones + textures.

22-07-2007, 23:44	#1 (permalink)
fionaB Loves the place Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Scotland Posts: 5,318	thru the window CnC as always welcome

23-07-2007, 00:29	#2 (permalink)
cpd23 Getting Comfy Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 186	Re: thru the window Fio I am not sure if its the angle of the window or the sunlight in the corner, but it just doesn't work for me. The ocean view is great. Thanks for the share

24-07-2007, 17:00	#3 (permalink)
Dave Canon Forum Regular Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Cheltenham Posts: 500	Re: thru the window Fiona, I think that there is a good shot there but the foreground needs something extra. Maybe a person on the left looking out at the view?

24-07-2007, 23:20	#4 (permalink)
JMitchell Feet under the table Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: London, England Posts: 3,417	Re: thru the window I like that, the tones and the exposure are great. Perhaps a person on the left would help, but it doesn't bother me. Something new and original (and in COLOUR! )

24-07-2007, 23:37	#5 (permalink)
Charlotte Loves the place Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Romsey, Hampshire Posts: 5,649	Re: thru the window I like it, except I do think the RHS is cropped too tightly, so that it makes the composition look unbalanced; it looks like you've cropped it tightly in order to exclude an unwanted part of the scene. I like the colours, tones + textures.

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