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Old 25-11-2006, 21:45   #1 (permalink)
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Hello there.
Here is a photo I've taken yesterday. This little guy was sitting against the wall, watching others with a most interesting look, he was alone.


Hope you like it. Any C/C is highly appreciated. Thanks for taking the time to look!
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Old 26-11-2006, 06:22   #2 (permalink)
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I like this, it's a good location for this kind of shot and the subject looks just right. I like a picture that tells part of a story and leaves you wondering about the rest. Has he fallen out with his mates, or was his big brother forced to bring him along but no one wants him there etc.

The toning suits the mood of the shot which is good.

To be fussy there are a couple of things that would improve it for me, he seems to be leaning backwards, maybe the wall was but for the context of this shot it would feel better to have his back more vertical. I'd also like to see a bit more of the background to the front and right of the image, or have him moved a bit further away (to about halfway between where he is a that dark splodge on the wall). I think that position would emphasise that there's no one in any direction and also put him in a stronger place in the frame.

All in all I really like this shot.
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Old 26-11-2006, 12:48   #3 (permalink)
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Great shot.

I have to agree totally with Danpen's comments. He said it all.

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Nice strong diagonal leads you eye nicely across the shot. Good capture.
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Agree with dan pen, like the shot a lot, but there is room for improvement in terms of composition.
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ye I like this too. It seems to let the viewer "make up thier own mind" with whats going on with the rest of the photo. nice pic
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