Warehouse

moonrider · 24-04-2007, 01:54

This is my first "contrasty" conversion what do you guys think? Does it work and if not
what to do better.

**Markulous** · 24-04-2007, 07:38

Like the balance and processing - tho' not too sure of the canopy and what it brings to the shot (think it's the colour, tho' appreciate there's not much you can do with that...... except change it!)

Geoff Semmens · 24-04-2007, 08:50

Like the lines, the contrast but agree about the colour of the canopy. It makes it too dominant.

A monochrome image with a single small touch of colour may have been more effective.

Saying that, your realisation is good. Was this what you set out to do or did the image emerge on the computer?

Geoff TWO

skipper954 · 24-04-2007, 20:40

In very strong terms, the canopy ruins a very good image. I like the strong contract, and without the canopy, gives a wonderful 1930's feeling.

Good job, G2.

Rob Barron · 27-04-2007, 15:23

Would be easy to convert the canopy to mono the same as the rest and then you've got a winner, the brickwork is excellent and gives a real sense of age and neglect to the place.

Good work, just change that canopy.

Cheers,
Rob

moonrider · 27-04-2007, 15:34

Thanks for your comments and insight, this is the shot all in black and white.
I must say I prefer this version.

Rob Barron · 27-04-2007, 21:16

So do i Moon, looks much better and I really like the whole image now. Well done

Cheers,
Rob

24-04-2007, 01:54	#1 (permalink)
moonrider Quite Chatty Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Denver, Colorado Posts: 72	Warehouse This is my first "contrasty" conversion what do you guys think? Does it work and if not what to do better.

24-04-2007, 07:38	#2 (permalink)
Markulous Pixalo Crew Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Peak District Posts: 9,691	Re: Warehouse Like the balance and processing - tho' not too sure of the canopy and what it brings to the shot (think it's the colour, tho' appreciate there's not much you can do with that...... except change it!)

24-04-2007, 08:50	#3 (permalink)
Geoff Semmens Quite Chatty Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: South Wales Posts: 69	Re: Warehouse Like the lines, the contrast but agree about the colour of the canopy. It makes it too dominant. A monochrome image with a single small touch of colour may have been more effective. Saying that, your realisation is good. Was this what you set out to do or did the image emerge on the computer? Geoff TWO

24-04-2007, 20:40	#4 (permalink)
skipper954 Feet under the table Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Southeast Florida USA Posts: 1,721	Re: Warehouse In very strong terms, the canopy ruins a very good image. I like the strong contract, and without the canopy, gives a wonderful 1930's feeling. Good job, G2.

27-04-2007, 15:23	#5 (permalink)
Rob Barron Loves the place Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Poole, Dorset Posts: 5,204	Re: Warehouse Would be easy to convert the canopy to mono the same as the rest and then you've got a winner, the brickwork is excellent and gives a real sense of age and neglect to the place. Good work, just change that canopy. Cheers, Rob

27-04-2007, 15:34	#6 (permalink)
moonrider Quite Chatty Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Denver, Colorado Posts: 72	Re: Warehouse Thanks for your comments and insight, this is the shot all in black and white. I must say I prefer this version.

27-04-2007, 21:16	#7 (permalink)
Rob Barron Loves the place Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Poole, Dorset Posts: 5,204	Re: Warehouse So do i Moon, looks much better and I really like the whole image now. Well done Cheers, Rob

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