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| Photo Critique Discuss Water Fall a first try...C&C please. I wonder about the composition. Should I have included more foreground? Something is not quite right to me. ... |
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Water Fall a first try
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Re: Water Fall a first try
ss looks good and no blown highlights in the whites
biggest problem for me is the large clump of branches in the fg. not sure if it was possible but if you could have cleaned that out it would be a big improvement aside from the clump I like this shot - beautiful stream |
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Re: Water Fall a first try
Agree about the branches as above but I also think that the exposure is too long for this particular waterfall, creating milky water without detail.
I personally think that long exposures work better on 'falls with distinct 'streams' of water within the flume (as in the extreme right edge of the upper right 'fall). A shorter exposure would've demonstrated movement without blurring to no detail |
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Re: Water Fall a first try
Thanks people
b.van der dylan Will try a bit more "gardening" in future. It was only rubbish washed down in recent rain. Markulous Will try a few more at faster speed. My original plan was to photograph Scale Force (Lakeland's Highest) but ran out of time. So just a mini one (possibly lakelands smallest?) Roger |
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Re: Water Fall a first try
I think it looks perfect!
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