[monkeydave]

after a shot in the indepth forum.

thanks guys so far..

i have come up with this ..

hope people like as i do....




tfl

any c+c always welcome good or not...


md

[Dabhand16]

This is another one of your well exposed, high standard shots (Grrr!)

Nit-picking, I think the creases on her neck from the head turn are a bit of a spoiler, and her expression appears 'forced/artificial' (even if it is not).

She looks as if she enjoys modeling for you, and I bet you are one proud Dad.

[monkeydave]

Originally Posted by Dabhand16

This is another one of your well exposed, high standard shots (Grrr!)

Nit-picking, I think the creases on her neck from the head turn are a bit of a spoiler, and her expression appears 'forced/artificial' (even if it is not).

She looks as if she enjoys modeling for you, and I bet you are one proud Dad.

i like nit picking mate its how i learn .. well try to..

for you graham..



thanks for taking the time...


md

[Dabhand16]

Thanks MD

I like this one maybe a little tight on the LHS?

[sawdust]

Like them both, true what Dab said about the neck will wach out for that sunday. still two cracking shots. What background are you using?

[monkeydave]

Originally Posted by sawdust

Like them both, true what Dab said about the neck will wach out for that sunday. still two cracking shots. What background are you using?

white muslin sheet lighted with two lights...

thanks for the comment...


md

[jake]

Lot better as a full face shot

[silkstone]

[P-E]

She has amazing eyes ........obviously doesn't take after you thankfully for her looks

[monkeydave]

Originally Posted by P-E

She has amazing eyes ........obviously doesn't take after you thankfully for her looks

hey of cause she does..


thanks folks...


md