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| Photos for fun Discuss First post from me...Your comments and critiques pls. Tried a night shot. let me know where i went wrong.... |
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: India
Posts: 6
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Your comments and critiques pls.
![]() Tried a night shot. let me know where i went wrong.
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Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Northumberland, UK
Posts: 844
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Re: First post from me
Hi Rahil,
the night shot I like but I think you need to concentrate on teh building itself and crop out much of the right of the photo, including the minaret - it is too bright and distracts from the fine detail elsewhere. I think a square crop would suit the composition much better. |
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Wimbledon
Posts: 6,428
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Re: First post from me
Rahil, I've moved your thread into the Sharing section as Critique section only allows one shot at a time
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: London, England
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Re: First post from me
Great first shots Rahil! Love the first one, a classic image with a beautiful sky and the composition is spot on.
I totally agree with MB's comments on the second shot, although if that was the composition you wanted, then I can't fault it technically, it is a very good night shot! |
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