LILY

sawdust · 15-08-2007, 18:08

thought I would have a go at this Black and White thing. converted in CS3 and a bit of noise added

Charlotte · 15-08-2007, 20:29

Not much of a range of tones there sawdust - the dark tones are all the same tone + so are the light tones, without very much toning in between; consequently it lacks depth. Comp is a bit uniform + square-on. I like the noise

I think this one has potential, but a bit more creativity is called for

**Dabhand16** · 15-08-2007, 21:13

I'll broadley go along with Charlotte, but I quite like the symmetry in the composition.

Maybe not a good one for mono.

15-08-2007, 18:08	#1 (permalink)
sawdust Forum Regular Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Ashby de la zouch Leicestershire Posts: 700	LILY thought I would have a go at this Black and White thing. converted in CS3 and a bit of noise added

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Charlotte Loves the place Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Romsey, Hampshire Posts: 5,795	Re: LILY Not much of a range of tones there sawdust - the dark tones are all the same tone + so are the light tones, without very much toning in between; consequently it lacks depth. Comp is a bit uniform + square-on. I like the noise I think this one has potential, but a bit more creativity is called for

15-08-2007, 21:13	#3 (permalink)
Dabhand16 Pixalo Crew Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Dunstable Bedfordshire UK Posts: 8,988	Re: LILY I'll broadley go along with Charlotte, but I quite like the symmetry in the composition. Maybe not a good one for mono.

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