[sawdust]

Some more from Sunday's shoot The Girl is Daniel the daughter of a work friend she said she would love to pose again for me so will look forward to that soon.
#1

#2

#3

[Charlotte]

I think these should be in Sharing

Love #3

#2's good, but maybe a bit tightly cropped on the RH boy.

I personally don't think #1 is very flattering, but the majority of the male population might disagree with me

[Rob Barron]

I don't like her 'cleavage' area but a crop to the lower part of her shoulders reveals a good portrait. The lads are terrific, really captures some lovely moments there.

Cheers,
Rob

[sawdust]

Why sharing Charlotte Im after feedback I know I need to improve And I know you on here will give me that . The Girls skin was a bit blemishy so had to tone it down.she as never posed before so we were both beginers .Maybe a good bra may have been called for.

[sawdust]

ooppss just read the rules about one shot at a time sorry

[Dabhand16]

I'll move this over to sharing Sawdust

Very nice set.

[Whipspeed]

Love #3, great pose and interaction with the camera. #2 They are perhaps a bit too close to the camera and are quite shadowed, which is a shame as their expressions are good. #1 I'm afraid is not flattering, she has a grey cast to her skin and quite dark shadows under her eyes, bit too much eyeliner as well, making her look a bit harsh for a young girl (but I expect she's at that age where more is better like most teenage girls )
He hair needs to be a bit looser where it's tied back and yes a bra is certainly needed! But as Rob says, a head and shoulders crop and a bit of PS work to remove any blemishes and under eye shadows would reveal a really nice portrait.