Thanks to my models - part 2

Summerleft · 14-10-2007, 15:55

few more , lights not perfect, i ended up with a large board and a small one made with paper lol but for practice happy with the outcomes

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fionaB · 14-10-2007, 19:24

another nice set, the forst one looks OOF tho....... the last two would be crackers but you have clipped the top off her head!
the horses ones are great

Fi

Charlotte · 14-10-2007, 20:07

No's. 8, 9 + 10 are very nice

Summerleft · 14-10-2007, 20:32

They do have a whole head on the originals but apparently if you take of the top of the hair it makes the eyes stand out more, well thats what it said on the PDF portrait tutorial I was reading so thought id give it a go.

Charlotte · 14-10-2007, 20:58

I think that technique would work with an overall tighter crop, but it does look a bit odd here since you have included so much under her chin but chopped the top of her head off. I'd suggest cropping the bottom to just include her shoulders, + crop the RHS up to the edge of her shoulder.

However, in this case her eyes are very prominent anyway.

14-10-2007, 15:55	#1 (permalink)
Summerleft Feet under the table Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Derbyshire, UK Posts: 1,580	Thanks to my models - part 2 few more , lights not perfect, i ended up with a large board and a small one made with paper lol but for practice happy with the outcomes 7. 8. 9. 10. 11. 12.

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fionaB Loves the place Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Scotland Posts: 5,454	Re: Thanks to my models - part 2 another nice set, the forst one looks OOF tho....... the last two would be crackers but you have clipped the top off her head! the horses ones are great Fi

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Charlotte Loves the place Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Romsey, Hampshire Posts: 5,796	Re: Thanks to my models - part 2 No's. 8, 9 + 10 are very nice

14-10-2007, 20:32	#4 (permalink)
Summerleft Feet under the table Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Derbyshire, UK Posts: 1,580	Re: Thanks to my models - part 2 They do have a whole head on the originals but apparently if you take of the top of the hair it makes the eyes stand out more, well thats what it said on the PDF portrait tutorial I was reading so thought id give it a go.

14-10-2007, 20:58	#5 (permalink)
Charlotte Loves the place Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Romsey, Hampshire Posts: 5,796	Re: Thanks to my models - part 2 I think that technique would work with an overall tighter crop, but it does look a bit odd here since you have included so much under her chin but chopped the top of her head off. I'd suggest cropping the bottom to just include her shoulders, + crop the RHS up to the edge of her shoulder. However, in this case her eyes are very prominent anyway.

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