Young Model

Fangman · 06-04-2008, 22:38

It looks as if you might not be safe! My eye is drawn a little too much to the knitting rather than the eyes. Makes a dramatic pose as long as you don't get the blame for getting the sweater sandy!

Charlotte · 06-04-2008, 22:42

A model who's camera-shy

You didn't ask for critique on this lifethrualens, but I am distracted by the feet sticking out of her head + L shoulder (which said feet need a wash

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Nice knuckles

fionaB · 12-04-2008, 19:01

i have to agree with charlotte on this, and the processing looks a little flat . have you checked levels for a full tonal range.......... other than that is a nice image.

Fi

Larne · 12-04-2008, 21:22

If it's an advert for the sweater then it's a great picture. If it's an advert for the model then less so. Doesn't really work for me but that's taste for you.

06-04-2008, 21:19	#1 (permalink)
lifethrualens Been here a while Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 309	Young Model

06-04-2008, 22:38	#2 (permalink)
Fangman Forum Regular Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Ely Posts: 1,078	Re: Young Model It looks as if you might not be safe! My eye is drawn a little too much to the knitting rather than the eyes. Makes a dramatic pose as long as you don't get the blame for getting the sweater sandy!

06-04-2008, 22:42	#3 (permalink)
Charlotte Loves the place Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Romsey, Hampshire Posts: 5,795	Re: Young Model A model who's camera-shy You didn't ask for critique on this lifethrualens, but I am distracted by the feet sticking out of her head + L shoulder (which said feet need a wash ) Nice knuckles

12-04-2008, 19:01	#4 (permalink)
fionaB Loves the place Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Scotland Posts: 5,451	Re: Young Model i have to agree with charlotte on this, and the processing looks a little flat . have you checked levels for a full tonal range.......... other than that is a nice image. Fi

12-04-2008, 21:22	#5 (permalink)
Larne Been here a while Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Warrington, Cheshire, UK Posts: 450	Re: Young Model If it's an advert for the sweater then it's a great picture. If it's an advert for the model then less so. Doesn't really work for me but that's taste for you.

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