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The Landing Stage
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Dabhand16
Pixalo Crew
Registered: June 2006 Location: Dunstable Bedfordshire UK Posts: 10,852
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Sun October 15, 2006 3:25pm
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Rating: 8.00
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This has got my two favorite ingredients. Derelict and mono. Nice shot, but the clouds give a kind of artificial feel. It might be the light edge at the top and on the LHS, and/or the feathered bottom edge. Something just not quite right for me.
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maddiedigital
Getting Comfy
Registered: October 2006 Location: Liverpool Posts: 141
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Sun October 15, 2006 4:37pm
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Thanks for comments - I know what you mean it's not quite there yet - may do abit more work on it and repost but as you say it's a wonderful scene and such a shame it'll soon be demolished to build anew 'fancy' terminal! cheers Maddie
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maddiedigital
Getting Comfy
Registered: October 2006 Location: Liverpool Posts: 141
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Sun October 15, 2006 4:37pm
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Thanks for comments - I know what you mean it's not quite there yet - may do abit more work on it and repost but as you say it's a wonderful scene and such a shame it'll soon be demolished to build anew 'fancy' terminal! cheers Maddie
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cotter
Forum Regular
Registered: October 2006 Location: Lauder, Scottish Borders Posts: 609
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Sun October 15, 2006 7:30pm
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Rating: 8.00
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Nice shot, I agree with dabhand the clouds are the issue. If you crop the top of the frame just as the dark clouds start, it looks great. Have you got any shots closer(for more detail areas??) love to see them!!
cotter
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Markulous
Pixalo Crew
Registered: July 2006 Location: Peak District Posts: 10,751
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Mon October 16, 2006 9:05am
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Putting my unoriginal hat on, I'd agree with the others! Sky is somewhat weird and artificial looking. But I'd go further and argue that the interest is in the landing stage and foreground anyway!
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