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jockwav
Been here a while
Registered: November 2006
Location: Edinburgh(outskirts)
Posts: 449
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Wed November 29, 2006 7:28pm
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I think it needs darkened a little,lol.
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Dave
Pixalo Crew
Registered: July 2005
Posts: 15,503
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Wed November 29, 2006 7:32pm
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OK, here's my attempt
- Levels adjusted....way too light to start with
- S Curve added to deepen the blacks on the cat
- Cropped to bring cat on the 1/3 line, which balances the shot better
Not sure if I've over sharpened it though 
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cotter
Forum Regular
Registered: October 2006
Location: Lauder, Scottish Borders
Posts: 609
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Wed November 29, 2006 7:53pm
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Rating: 10.00
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great light, did you use a flash?
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emmettleffel
Forum Regular
Registered: September 2006
Location: Banbury,Oxon
Posts: 774
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Wed November 29, 2006 8:09pm
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I used available light but I did not give much attention to the ROT so Daves crop looks much better
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Joseph McGarraghy
Been here a while
Registered: November 2006
Location: North of Manchester, England
Posts: 388
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Wed November 29, 2006 8:14pm
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Who's dead? 
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Helena
Getting Comfy
Registered: October 2006
Location: Hampshire, UK
Posts: 166
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Wed November 29, 2006 9:06pm
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I love his black collar! Suits him down to the ground.
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Gary Bagshawe
Rep Point Winner 07
Registered: April 2005
Location: Sheffield UK
Posts: 2,243
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Wed November 29, 2006 9:06pm
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Rating: 10.00
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roflmao
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Dabhand16
Pixalo Crew
Registered: June 2006
Location: Dunstable Bedfordshire UK
Posts: 9,644
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Wed November 29, 2006 10:56pm
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It might be my monitor, but I think the contrast might need to be increased. I'm having a bit of difficulty making out the body, even with the light off.
How long could it hold this pose before loosing it's grip?
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Chris
Been here a while
Registered: August 2006
Location: Isle of Wight
Posts: 392
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Wed November 29, 2006 11:05pm
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Over saturated a touch perhaps?
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skipper954
Feet under the table
Registered: September 2006
Location: Southeast Florida USA
Posts: 1,721
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Thu November 30, 2006 2:38am
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I had to look at this one for a long time. In general, I like it, but I have some problems.
The focus is just a tad soft, and the cat is centered (centred?). Maybe I am beating a dead horse (cat?) but the primary object of interest should usually be off center to create more interest.
One more thing: I love mono, but I think this would be a keeper in color.
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Dave
Pixalo Crew
Registered: July 2005
Posts: 15,503
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Thu November 30, 2006 10:38am
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Amazing, now I'm looking at it on my Laptop it has a completely different look ...still a corker though 
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emmettleffel
Forum Regular
Registered: September 2006
Location: Banbury,Oxon
Posts: 774
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Thu November 30, 2006 12:30pm
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I got the idea for this after hearing that an art gallery had opened that was completely devoid of any art. Apparently people paid to be taken around the gallery by a guide who asked them to imagine the various pieces. ???????
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Dabhand16
Pixalo Crew
Registered: June 2006
Location: Dunstable Bedfordshire UK
Posts: 9,644
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Thu November 30, 2006 12:51pm
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Maybe you could produce a set? I'm sure you could find some galleries only too willing to show them.
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emmettleffel
Forum Regular
Registered: September 2006
Location: Banbury,Oxon
Posts: 774
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Thu November 30, 2006 7:39pm
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i've got a complete set Graham, in any colour required !
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cotter
Forum Regular
Registered: October 2006
Location: Lauder, Scottish Borders
Posts: 609
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Thu November 30, 2006 9:14pm
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I don't think it would work as well in colour
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